Learner Response

WWW: The front page is a reasonable start and the topic and text has potential. it is clear you have done research.

EBI: Written English is a major problem. This is not so much spelling/grammer than formal, academic writing style + organisation. You are not using topic sentences.

You don't introduce any of your quotes. At one point, you have 3 quotes in a row with no context, discussion or analysis.

You have almost a page of copied and pasted stuff on of James Bulger case: Why? I can't believe you proofread this essay and didn't see a major problem here.

Lack of media theory and impact on audience. Need many more academic quotes + analysis of these quotes to reach higher grades.

Referencing and bibliography is wrong: i can't check the research so can't award marks for it.

Linked Production

Production brief

Opening to a horror movie
4 minutes
3 pages

Research

The Boy:

Anna-belle:

Dead silence:

Project schedule

filming - next week

editing - in 3 weeks time

Mise-en-scene planning

Location: Tall Castle/house  Building (need more research to find exact place)

Props:  car, doll, house, blanket, bed, photo frame picture, paper, chair 

Costumes; normal casual clothing, , heals

Lighting; day time high key lighting 

Sound; dramatic, classical music 

Make up: simple, natural look